Yeah i'll be the 1st
Nice art u draw......more important practice more to draw B...
u know wat (Breast)hahaha.....!!!!


(just a comment dont mad at me.....)

Lol...U so jahat ah...Mentang2 u can draw better than i do! haha

Aiya! I misz my chance 2 b the 1st one!!! Nvr mind, next time will b my turn! About comments: Hm... COOL! Natsumi is sa cool as ever! Natsuni and...??? ur drawing are getting more & more mature! my drawings looks like baby if compare 2 urs. KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK!! I'll b expwcting more drawing from u... hehehe

hahah...just a comment ma...i also having problem drawing B
but u both r good

Haiya...um its Natsumi and Len. I think you've seen that char in my comic, DOUBT. Actually the first to comment was someone else..haha. Too bad.

Hey that's very cool

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Like your soft lips grazing mine...
You're so beautiful...

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Thanks~!

Hey, welcome to DA! Most people don't leave critique here, so no need to be scared generally, you'll probably end up wanting critique after a while!
Nice fine linework, but making some other lines besides the main outline stronger and bolder would give the image more definition, such as making the edge of the jacket a stronger line, but leaving the details fine. That's a very 'old skool' manga drawing style you have, makes me think of things like 'Flame of Recca' the older volumes of 'Oh My Goddess' and '3x3 eyes' I would suggest making the male character's jawline stronger, and the female's shorter and more rounded, just changing their jawlines a little would make the difference between male and female easier to see.
Really good work on the fabric, but in places the hair seems a little like you don't know where it's growing from. you should pay attention to the hairline and parting and stuff of a character and work the hair from there. I think that's enough critique for today ^_^' Keep up the good work!

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Train, train, take us away...
take us away, far away,
To the future we will go, where it stops, nobody knows.

this is an excellent piece. you have a very distinct and, as darthmongoose said, old school style. the clothing is well done, especially the billowing jacket.

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poignant and wistful...or was it pungent and wasteful?